Emily's Writing Blog Week 31

So I been reading Mistress by James  Patterson and David Elis and its about this mystery that a police went to the persons apartment and they were looking at her thinks and taking notes. it was a boy police who is writing this story and it was about the police man he was passing though this building and he saw people looking up to the building. When he saw he was a girl almost falling off her belcaunie  and then he wanted to help but if he went and help maybe the person will fall down and he would be too late. So he left and went to his office and that's where I stooped reading. What I like about this book is that they explain a lot about hoe a police comes and it's true police come and see whats in your house.What I don't like about the book is that the author wrote some words like condom lol and I think that was not that good so kids my age to read.I will recommend this book to someone who likes mystery because that like one of the reason I got this book because its a mystery.